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Title: Ghost Town (4/8)
Author: [livejournal.com profile] strangevisitor7
Beta: [livejournal.com profile] lyl_devil and [livejournal.com profile] pen37
Rated: PG-13
Fandom: Supernatural & The Magnificent 7 (TV series)
Characters: Sam and Dean Winchester; The Seven: Chris Larabee, Buck Wilmington, Vin Tanner, Ezra Standish, Nathan Jackson, Josiah Sanchez, JD Dunne; OMC – Mathew Tanner
Disclaimer: The characters you know and love all belong to their respective creators. Mathew Tanner is mine

Summary: Sam and Dean Winchester investigate the town of Four Corners and find that the ghosts of six men have been protecting/haunting the town for over a century.

Chapter Summary: In which our brothers attempt to salt and burn a few graves. Unfortunately there are some pretty stubborn ghosts haunting Four Corners.

Chapter List:
Chapter 1; Chapter 2; Chapter 3; Chapter 4; Chapter 5; Chapter 6; Chapter 7; Chapter 8



A/N2: For those of you unfamiliar with the characters of the Magnificent Seven, brief profiles can be found here which should tell you all you need to know or just ask [livejournal.com profile] lyl_devil who will use her mad powers of persuasion to turn you into a Mag7 fan as she did me.

JD, Josiah, Vin, Chris, Buck, Nathan & Ezra

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Chapter 4


After stopping at the hotel to change out of their suits and into comfortable shirts and jeans, the Winchesters left Cornerstone and headed fifteen miles due south to where the town of Four Corners stood.

Dean pulled the Impala up the dirt road leading to the small graveyard and parked. When they’d driven by, Sam had pointed out the yellow police tape that still cordoned off the north side of Main Street where the explosion had occurred. Luckily, Cornerstone didn’t have the manpower to keep a guard on the site, so they had the place to themselves.

“A marker for the seven?” Dean said indicating the three foot high stone monument which dominated the small cemetery illuminated in the car’s headlights.

“Town really must have respected those guys,” Sam replied. “That kind of adoration could explain why they haven’t moved on.”

“Death bed promises can contain powerful mojo, too. I’m guessing we may have to burn Tanner’s body too, just to be sure.”

Sam nodded and grabbed his flashlight before exiting the Impala. Dean turned off the engine, plunging the graveyard into darkness again.

Supplies and flashlights in hand the brothers trudged into the cemetery.

“This looks relatively new.” Sam said as he swept his flashlight across the headstone. The names of the seven were inscribed on both sides. “It’s a tribute to all seven and we know Vin Tanner didn’t die with the rest.”

Dean knelt down beside the monument. “There are brass plates set in the ground here,” he said as he brushed aside some debris from the one on the end to reveal the name Ezra Standish.

Sam turned and played his flashlight across the ground illuminating the line of brass plates. “They’re all here. Where do you want to start?”

Dean pointed to Standish’s marker. “I’ll start here. You start at the other end. This is going to take some time.” He stood, setting his flashlight on the stone and began to dig.

Sam nodded and placed his flashlight to shed light on the grave of Buck Wilmington.

The brothers worked without talking; the sound of shovel hitting dirt the only noise breaking the silence in the graveyard.

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Mathew Tanner had watched the two ‘agents’ leave in a car no government official should be driving. The old Chevy hadn’t been hard to track down in a town the size of Cornerstone. Now, as he stood watching them from the shadows, it was clear the two were impostors just as he’d suspected. Mathew felt his anger rise as he watched them desecrate the graves of the town’s heroes.

“Don’t do anything foolish, Matt.” The quiet voice pierced the darkness and made him jump.

He turned to see the man in black standing next to him. “Chris. I have to stop them.”

The ghost shook his head. “We’ll handle it. 'Sides it’s not the first time some crazy idiots have tried to dig us up.”

When Mathew had been a teenager his father had brought him out to Four Corners to share with him the real story of the ghosts that haunted the town. The Tanners, he’d said, could always see them and it was their job to help the six keep the town safe as a testament to their legacy.

“That explosion, Chris. Someone could have gotten hurt,” Mathew said. The destruction of the bulldozer was the first time he’d been privy to any violence on the part of the six. Usually it was the spooking of wayward teenagers who drove out to Four Corners to do what ever it was teenagers did in deserted towns. That would start the rumors up again about the town being haunted and keep others away.

“We do what we have to do,” Chris replied.

Mathew shivered at the coldness in the ghost’s voice. As much as he wanted to see the town preserved, Mathew knew that he couldn’t allow the six to hurt anyone. If it came to that, then he supposed he’d have to figure out a way to stop them himself.

“Well, I have to admit that you did get the demolition delayed. Now let me handle it legally. No more explosions,” the lawyer begged.

“We won’t ever hurt anybody,” Chris assured him.

Mathew inclined his head toward the two still working on the graves. “What about them?”

“I think we got this covered.” Chris smiled as he looked out toward the graveyard.

Following his gaze, Mathew noticed that the grave robbers were no longer alone. He smiled as he imagined what they must be thinking at the appearance of the spirits. “I can see that,” he chuckled and wondered how he’d let himself become such good friends with ghosts.

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“Can’t a man rest in peace?” The sound of a heavy southern drawl cut through the silence.

Dean looked up from the grave he was digging. “What the hell?” He heaved himself out of the hole, grabbed his salt-filled shot gun and aimed it at the ghost.

The ghost threw up his hands in surrender. “There is no need for violence,” Ezra said. “I am simply trying to save you from continuing in the futile effort to desecrate my grave site. I assure you that there is nothing of value to be found.”

“Sam,” Dean called over his shoulder. “Looks like we found our ghosts.” He wasn’t sure why he hadn’t blasted the apparition but there was no indication that he was in any imminent danger. Maybe they could convince the spirit to move on and save themselves a bunch of digging.

Sam appeared at his side; gun aimed at the ghost. “It’s Ezra Standish, Dean. I recognize him from the picture.”

The man favored them with a lopsided grin. “So nice to be recognized. Now if you gentleman don’t mind, I would prefer it if you would depart from these premises immediately.”

“Aw hell! They’ve been digging at mine too.”

The brothers swung around to see another spirit standing beside the grave that Sam had been working on. “Buck Wilmington.” Sam whispered as he eyed the big man in the floppy cowboy hat.

“You guys do know that you’re ghosts?” Dean asked. He tracked their new arrival with his shot gun as it moved to stand next to Ezra.

The big man gave a hearty laugh. “Course we do, boy.”

“So why haven’t you moved on?” Sam asked.

“Got work to do,” Buck replied as if the answer should have been obvious.

“Guess we do this the hard way then. Sam keep digging,” Dean ordered. “I’ll cover you.”

Nodding Sam jumped back into the hole that Dean had started and proceeded to finish the excavation.

“I am intrigued, Buck. They know we are ghosts and yet they do not seem the least bit perturbed by our presence.”

“Think we may be losing our touch?” Buck asked.

Ezra shrugged. “Shall we call for reinforcements?”

“Hi, Buck, Ezra” A young man in a suit and bowler hat appeared acknowledging the other ghosts. “Chris said you might need some back up.”

Ezra rolled his eyes. “JD, I was hoping that Mr. Larabee would join us. No offense but he is significantly more intimidating than you.”

The young man smiled. “S’okay Ezra. He’s busy.”

“Busy?” Dean asked.

“Oh hey there. I’m JD Dunne and you are?” He asked holding out his hand.

Dean stared at the proffered appendage but didn’t move.

“Now JD, you know he ain’t gonna shake your hand,” Buck admonished playfully.

“Oh right.” The kid pulled his hand back and looked at it before shoving it into his pocket. “I forget sometimes,” he said sheepishly.

Ezra stifled a laugh but then frowned as he watched the intruders continue to empty his grave. “I must repeat JD’s inquiry. Who are you gentlemen and what do you hope to accomplish in our little graveyard this evening?”

Dean stared at the three and yet found himself answering, “Dean Winchester and that’s my brother Sam.”

“Just like the rifle?” JD offered brightly.

Dean rolled his eyes. “Yeah, just like the rifle.” He’d come across many types of ghosts over the years but one that reminded him of an over eager puppy – well that was just wrong. “Sam, you almost done there. I’m feeling the need to shoot something.” His gaze settled on JD.

“Mr. Winchester, I assure you, JD meant no offense,” Ezra said “As I mentioned before we simply wanted to save you the trouble of all that physical exertion.”

“Well thanks there, fancy pants, but I think we know what we’re doing. You’re ghosts and you need to move on. We’re here to make sure you do just that and don’t hurt anyone else.”

Buck’s eyes grew dark. “No hold on a minute. We ain’t never hurt no one.”

“Well none that didn’t deserve it,” JD reminded him.

“Sure.” Buck shrugged. “There was some that did but that was a long time ago before this,” he said indicating their undead state.

“The clang of metal hitting wood stopped all conversation. Sam laid his shovel along side the grave and grabbed his flashlight. “Uh, Dean this casket is relatively new; certainly not the original.”

Dean grabbed his own flashlight and shone it into the hole revealing a modern coffin. “What the hell? Maybe it’s not him.”

“I assure you sir, that it is me,” Ezra said.

“Or what’s left of ya,” Buck snickered.

JD peered into the open grave from the opposite side. “Gee Ezra, that’s a nice one. Do you think we all got such nice ones?”

Buck chuckled. “Nah, kid you know Ezra, nothing but the best.”

“Will you dig mine up next?” JD asked the brothers. “I want to see what color it is.”

Dean glared at the annoying youth without responding. “Open it up and let’s get this over with,” he said to Sam.

Sam nodded and pried open the lid. Looking at the contents he sighed. “That’s what I was afraid of.”

“That don’t look right,” JD observed. “Is it s’posed to look like that? What happened to the body?”

“You,” Dean said pointing at Buck. “Can you shut him up?” He’d had enough of the kid’s irritating questions.

“I’ve been trying to do that for over a century. Can’t shut down JD’s mouth. It just keeps going-,”

“That’s not true. I just got questions Buck. Don’t think I need to be told to shut up so much,” JD interrupted.

“Kid, you ain’t stopped talking since we died,” Buck replied. “Think a man could get some peace and quiet when he’s dead, but no.”

“I ain’t a kid no more Buck,” JD groused. “Wish you’d stop calling me that.”

“I said, shut the hell up,” Dean shouted as he fired his weapon and JD dissipated in a waver of smoke.

“Now that was downright unfriendly,” Buck growled.

Ezra put a hand on the big man’s chest to stop him from charging Dean. “Buck, you must admit that JD was becoming a bit of a nuisance to our guests and if I am correct it was only rock salt.” He looked to Dean for confirmation. “Therefore, young Mr. Dunne will return shortly if he so desires. In the meantime, I suspect that these fine gentlemen have a few questions for us.”

Dean ignored the ghosts and addressed his brother. “If someone already burned their remains and then reburied them, how are they still walking around?”

Before Sam could answer Dean went flying backwards away from the grave. Sam jumped out to see the ghost of a large African-American man looming over his brother. Sam picked up his rifle and was about to shoot when Ezra intervened. “Please Mr. Winchester let me speak to my companion.”

Sam nodded and lowered his weapon.

“What the hell did you do to JD?” the ghost shouted down at the elder Winchester.

“Nathan. Calm yourself. We are attempting to have a friendly conversation with the Winchesters. There is no need for violence.” Ezra assured him as he pulled the healer away from Dean. “JD was just being JD,” he added as if that explained everything.

“He had no call to shoot the boy,” Nathan insisted “And why are you letting them mess with the grave site, anyway?”

“Seems these fellers aren’t really bothered by the fact that we’re dead,” Buck explained. “Little hard to scare ‘em off if they won’t spook.”

“Sam, I am really starting to hate this hunt,” Dean growled as he stood, dusted himself off and retrieved his shotgun. “Why don’t I just shoot them all so we don’t have to listen to any more of this crap?”

Nathan crossed his arms and glared at Dean. “You shoot me and I promise we’re gonna have a problem.”

“Dean, let me handle this,” Sam said as he stepped in to stop his brother from dissipating the only sources of information left to them.

“Finally, a man of reason,” Ezra said. He smoothed the lines of his red jacket as if removing ghostly dust. “I am ready to answer any and all of your questions, Mr. Winchester.”

“Your bodies. They were burned before?” Sam asked

Ezra nodded. “Yes. They was another man such as yourself many years ago who believed he could rid the town of its protections by burning our bodies. We did not allow let JD come around for that so he wouldn’t know.”

“Too bad you didn’t keep him away now,” Dean said. The kid had really gotten under his skin for some reason. To have died so young and yet he seemed so alive for – well – a ghost.

“Called hisself a hunter. We did get nice new burials after that and the local historical society put up this here marker.” Buck patted the monument that he had come to lean against. “Real pretty, don’t ya think?”

“That explains the new caskets,” Sam said. “Obviously, the hunter didn’t stick around to see if he’d got it right.”

“Damn sloppy of him.” Buck grinned.

“Obviously,” Dean repeated as he glared at the big man. “So, how are we going to get rid of them? We can’t burn them, they won’t go willingly and god knows they won’t shut up.”

Ezra chuckled. “I see that the truth has begun to penetrate. We will not be displaced. If you had heeded my words in the beginning, you could have saved yourself a significant amount of effort.”

“You done yakking Ezra? Because I believe we’ve been more than polite.” Chris Larabee had appeared along with Josiah. JD made his return as well glaring at Dean and fingering the gun in his holster.

“I was simply attempting to explain -.”

“Save it,” Chris said holding up a hand to stop the gambler in mid sentence. “You boys are finished here.” He smiled at the Winchesters but the grin never reached his eyes.

“We just wanted to help you move on,” Sam said wary of the newcomer. “It really would be in your best interest.”

“You’ll find that we won’t be moved and we will protect this town,” Chris said coolly.

“The good lord has seen fit to bind us to this place and here we will stay,” Josiah explained.

“In case you hadn’t noticed, town’s dead. There’s nothing to protect.” Dean gestured toward the deserted main street.

“Don’t matter,” the former preacher insisted. “We will stay until the powers that placed us here are finished with us.”

“Dean, we should go,” Sam said. There was nothing more they could accomplish at the grave site tonight and he wanted to look into more of the history surrounding the six.

“So what, we’re just supposed to leave them here? They may be friendly now but we both know that ghosts don't stay that way. They could hurt someone.”

“Hey, you’re the one who shot me. How’d you like it if I shot you?” JD said pulling the gun from his hip.

“You’re fine. Stop your whining,” Dean said dismissively. “You can’t shoot me with that anyway.”

Frustrated by the truth, JD returned the gun to its holster. “I don’t like ‘em. Why don’t they just leave?”

Buck came up behind the boy and clapped him on the shoulder. “They will. They just have to figure it out for themselves. Seem a little thick to me.” He grinned as he pointed to his head.

“I don’t know what else we can do here,” Sam said. “We should go.”

“You can’t be serious?” Dean stared at his brother. A silent conversation took place between the brothers as the six ghosts watched.

Finally, Dean nodded his understanding. “Guess you beat us guys,” Dean said cheerfully as he began gathering up his gear. “You win, we’ll be moving on and leaving you all to your protecting.”

Ezra snorted. “Sir, if we were at the poker table, I would have cleaned you out with bluffing like that.”

“No way I lose to some fancy pants like you, and where’d you get that fake accent from anyway?” Dean said responding to the challenge.

“Dean what are you doing?” Sam asked. “You gonna play poker with a ghost? We need to go.”

“Oh right,” He said and looking at Ezra added, “Next time.”

“I look forward to what is sure to be an exhilarating experience.” Ezra tipped his hat at the Winchesters and disappeared.

One by one the other five copied the gesture until the brothers were standing alone in the graveyard.

“What the hell just happened?” Dean asked.

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Date: 2008-05-31 02:57 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] dnalia.livejournal.com
*rofl*

Loved it! The ghosts are just so reasonable, and Dean has no idea what to think. Can't wait to read more.

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Date: 2008-05-31 05:40 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] dnalia.livejournal.com
Thanks! I got it from kroki_refur

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Date: 2008-05-31 03:37 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] strangevisitor7.livejournal.com
Thanks. I so glad you enjoyed the ghosts getting the best of Sam ans Dean.

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Date: 2008-05-31 03:35 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] wizefics.livejournal.com
This was too funny! It was really awesome.

I love love love this crossover and cannot wait for you to show us what happens next!

*glee*

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Date: 2008-05-31 03:38 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] strangevisitor7.livejournal.com
Thanks - I had a blast writing this chapter, so glad that you are loving it! Needless to say our intrepid brothers are a little confused.

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Date: 2008-05-31 03:36 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] dhark-charlotte.livejournal.com
Hee!

Can't wait for the rest.

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Date: 2008-05-31 03:39 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] strangevisitor7.livejournal.com
Thanks - more soon!

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Date: 2008-05-31 04:02 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] the-summoning-d.livejournal.com
It's great that you're updating so reliably - keep up the good work! I love that the ghosts are so much more rational about the situation than anyone else ^^ And some things even death can't change: JD still talks too much, Buck and Ezra still love blowing things up...Chris must be pleased; his ability to scare the crap out of people has only grown...

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Date: 2008-05-31 04:21 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] strangevisitor7.livejournal.com
Thanks! Glad that you are fining their characterization on target.
his ability to scare the crap out of people has only grown
Yep Chris makes an awesomely scary ghost.

As for the updates - I try to have a story complete before I start posting but I usually am not this reliable - to post everyday.

The fic has been so warmly received, I guess I'm as anxious to read your responses as ya'll are to read it. [g]

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Date: 2008-05-31 09:46 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] pen37.livejournal.com
Dean has no poker face? Not according to the inmates of the Arkansas state penetentiary. ;)

I look forward to the Dean/Ezra poker play-off. Should Dean bring his elvis shades, baseball hat and bandanna to cover the lower half of his face? ;)

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Date: 2008-05-31 09:57 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] strangevisitor7.livejournal.com
Good point. I do think Dean doesn't really take the ghost seriously - he just wants to make a clean exit. We know from 'Road Kill' he doesn't see them as anything but unnatural - no matter how real they appear.

Now when it comes to poker - well let's just say I think Ezra has met his match

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Date: 2008-05-31 09:49 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] kashmir-heroin.livejournal.com
HEEEE. THEY MEET AT LAST.

I LOVE the interaction between the Seven and the boys! it's exactly how I would have pictured it, everyone was perfectly in character. I love Sam and Dean just being dumbfounded at the ghosts being completely rational.

yeah, LOVED THIS CHAPTER. looking very much forward to more. ^_^

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Date: 2008-05-31 10:01 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] strangevisitor7.livejournal.com
Glad you enjoyed it. I was trying to show that the ghosts have dealt with this before and been victorious so to them Dean and Sam are just an annoying interruption to be dealt with.

I love Sam and Dean just being dumbfounded at the ghosts being completely rational.
LOL we knew that the 6 wouldn't be so easily dispatched. Too bad S&D didn't listen to Ezra.

I have to admit that this was my favorite chapter to write - so glad you loved it.

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Date: 2008-05-31 09:50 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] vonilyn.livejournal.com
::snicker::

::is happy::

pls, ma'am, i want some more?
::holds up empty vin-hat and peers over the edge::

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Date: 2008-05-31 10:04 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] strangevisitor7.livejournal.com
So glad you liked the meeting between all the boys!

As for your Vin-hat well there's more of the 6 but Vin ...sorry.

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Date: 2008-05-31 10:05 pm (UTC)
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From: [identity profile] ithildyn.livejournal.com
Another great part. I love the ghosts so much [g]

But, now I'm done reading, I can't put off writing any longer. Back to 1866 New Mexico for me!

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Date: 2008-05-31 10:16 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] strangevisitor7.livejournal.com
Thanks - It's hard not to love the Mag7 guys they are just so much fun. Glad you enjoyed it.

Wait New Mexico 1866 - that's about when Mag7 takes place - what are you doing there? Did I miss one of your stories?

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Date: 2008-05-31 10:22 pm (UTC)
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From: [identity profile] ithildyn.livejournal.com
It's a great story! The fact you can draw in readers who have no knowledge of one of the fandoms is a real talent.

I posted the first part (http://ithildyn.livejournal.com/640058.html) to a sequel to 'He's a Pirate' a few days ago. The flashbacks are from the last time Methos and Charlotte saw each other, which was 1866 NM [g] So it's not the Jack Sparrow part of the tale, but on the other hand, since it isn't a crossover, maybe more people will read it!

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Date: 2008-05-31 10:31 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] strangevisitor7.livejournal.com
Thanks! That means so much!

Must go read your story - but that's hilarious that they are in NM around the same time. Well i wanted to get Methos there to meet the Mag 7 boys - could you leave him when you're done [g]

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Date: 2008-05-31 10:36 pm (UTC)
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From: [identity profile] ithildyn.livejournal.com
There's actually a major plot point involving why he skedaddles, I'm afraid [g] and it will be the reason he hasn't seen Charlotte in a 150 odd years.

But remember Methos supposedly rode with Butch and Sundance, so there has to be a tie in somewhere!

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Date: 2008-05-31 10:54 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] strangevisitor7.livejournal.com
I figure once if find a good reason for him to run into the Mag7 boys the rest is easy!

Someone else reminded me he road with Butch - that would definitely make him a bad guy then.

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Date: 2008-09-27 05:02 am (UTC)
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From: [identity profile] ithildyn.livejournal.com
Lord, I just realized this is where it all started!

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Date: 2008-09-27 12:23 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] strangevisitor7.livejournal.com
See it is your fault. LOL. kind of fun to reread these old comments

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Date: 2008-06-01 12:54 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] farad.livejournal.com
LOL- that was delightful! You've caught the characters of - well, 6 of the 7 wonderfully - love Buck and Ezra, great voices for them!

YEA!! Looking forward to more!!

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Date: 2008-06-01 04:13 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] strangevisitor7.livejournal.com
Thank you! I love Ezra and Buck is my #2 so I guess that why they get the lion's share of the dialog. I find Ezra so easy to channel - it's nice to hear that you think i got the voices right!

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Date: 2008-06-01 01:17 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] gemspegasus.livejournal.com
Hi There,

Just caught up with this delectable crossover and I loove it!

You've blended two of my favorite fandoms so seamlessly. 8D

Could totally envision this meeting happening between the 7, er.. 6 ghosts and Dean and Sam. You have all their 'voices' down so wonderfully that I could totally 'see' this chapter in my head.

Dean, Sammy, you should have just listened to Ezra. You've never encountered ghosts like these before. Yes, Sam put on your thinking cap and research more into these ghosts.

Dean, I know JD can be a overeager at times but I wish you hadn't shot him, its not good to piss off these spirits, okay? I mean you got Nathan riled and I don't even want to think about Chris really getting pissed at you. I'd love to see you and Ezra play poker. Think you'd meet your match in Ezra.

Hmn...someone already salted and burned the 6? And they are still in Four Corners? Who burned them I wonder and does that tie in to why they are still there? Very interested to see how it all unravels.

In the third chapter, I squealed when I recognized Agents 'Cambell and Ramni" from "Long Distance Caller." Glad Matthew opened up to Dean and Sam and told them the truth about the 'boys.'

I enjoyed how Matthew was not fooled and followed them to the cemetery. I also enjoyed the little moment between Chris and Matthew in this chapter.

The second chapter with the deaths of the majority of our 'boys' had me in tears especially at the end when Chris died after ordering Vin to watch over the town for them. It was so heartbreaking to see Vin left behind. It must have been so hard on him.

In the first chapter, I loved the Ezra-Speak, "mechanical behmoth" made me laugh as did JD's curiousity. Josiah dropping the cigar on Chris's order and Nathan saying he didn't treat burns well were so spot on and you had me hooked from the first chapter.

Thank you for creating and sharing this yummy crossover over with us.

Its a treat to read. More soon, please. "Sam" and I giving you puppy eyes.

Oh and a little note for Mr. Kripke who thinks of SPN as a modern day western with monsters, an episode like this would be so awesome!

When I get engrossed with a story, I tend to 'talk' to the characters and I did it here again which just means I adored your story.

Thanks again for sharing your talent and imagination with us,

Take care,
hugs
Angela





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Date: 2008-06-01 04:22 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] strangevisitor7.livejournal.com
First let me say that I appreciate your wonderful feed back and fro taking the time to point out things you liked about each chapter.
It seems many Mag7 fans didn't like that Dean shot JD - LOL It's funny to see people against Dean. But he just doesn't know that JD is adorable and harmless.

It seems that the accounts of their previous hauntings did not go unnoticed but someone wasn't thorough. Not a mistake S&D are likely to make.

I recognized Agents 'Campbell and Ramni" from "Long Distance.Caller."
Those aliases were to good to not use again and seemed perfect for this story

I enjoyed how Matthew was not fooled - I find that the boys are not always that believable in their fed roles and Mathew represented an opportunity to call them on it - Glad you like my OMC. Chris does too.

Chapter 2 - was brutal and I felt terrible about doing that to Vin I am flattered that it touched you!

I loved the Ezra-Speak, "mechanical behmoth" made me laugh. SOmtimes it is easy to have Ezra go over the top but he does like to preform. he's my boy.

Again thank you for this wonderful feedback. Another chapter soon!

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Date: 2008-06-01 05:17 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] trystan830.livejournal.com
Dean stared at the three and yet found himself answering, “Dean Winchester and that’s my brother Sam.”
“Just like the rifle?” JD offered brightly.


hehehe....

loved this chapter! awesome interaction with Dean and Sam and the ghosts. :D

*wonders who the other hunter was*

*waits for more*

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Date: 2008-06-01 05:30 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] strangevisitor7.livejournal.com
So glad you enjoyed the banter - it was a blast to write.

As for the other hunter - no one in particular just a bad one obviously - at one point I was going to have it be John - one of his early adventures before he go to be a good hunter. Sam was going to find a reference to it in the journal but then I would have lost this scene so I ditched that angle.

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Date: 2008-06-01 08:09 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] trystan830.livejournal.com
yeah, i was kinda thinking John in his early days, but maybe it's better unnamed..... :)

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Date: 2008-06-01 10:22 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] strangevisitor7.livejournal.com
That's what i thought too. When i found another way in to the story

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Date: 2008-06-02 01:36 am (UTC)

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Date: 2008-06-01 05:22 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] serenityblue.livejournal.com
BROTLFMAO!!! LOVE IT!!! Could so easily see it all playing out in my head. Can't wait for the next installment!

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Date: 2008-06-01 06:43 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] strangevisitor7.livejournal.com
Thanks! So glad the voices rang true for you. More soon

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Date: 2008-06-01 10:03 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] mmekat.livejournal.com
Much, much love! That's some lovely banter you're slinging there. Dean's lucky I adore him, it's the only reason I can forgive him for shooting JD.

And thank you for letting Nathan's temper show. That side of him gets ignored so often.

*runs off to force everyone she knows to read this*

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Date: 2008-06-01 10:11 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] strangevisitor7.livejournal.com
Thanks you! I am so glad you agree about Nathan - I find that he is often portrayed as too mild but he does get riled when he thinks someone has done wrong.

Dean is frustrated and poor JD was on the receiving end.

Thanks Again

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Date: 2008-06-01 11:29 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] jedishadowolf.livejournal.com
Pitch perfect banter between Ezra, Buck, and JD! Dean shooting JD lost him some points, but Buck's “Now that was downright unfriendly" is a great reaction. If they were alive I could see him saying that right before the brawl began. The fact that Nathan's the one who lost his temper made me laugh.

Looking forward to more updates!

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Date: 2008-06-02 03:04 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] strangevisitor7.livejournal.com
Thanks - always good to know that everyone sounds like they should.

It seems people are really upset I let Dean shoot JD. I had no idea - it's unusual for Dean to be the bad guy [g]

As for Nathan - I just thought as a healer he wouldn't like his friends getting shot.

More soon!

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Date: 2008-06-02 01:17 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] neviditelny.livejournal.com
*cackles*

Ahh... Dean arguing with the Seven, especially Ezra...

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Date: 2008-06-02 03:13 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] strangevisitor7.livejournal.com
Yep Dean is frustrated by what should have been a simple S&B. now he knows better. I am so glad that you are enjoying the story

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Date: 2008-10-17 07:10 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] slavyanna.livejournal.com
I'm going to write down my opinion after I've read it all, but I just can't help mentioning thath the line

Ezra rolled his eyes. “JD, I was hoping that Mr. Larabee would join us. No offense but he is significantly more intimidating that you.”

is absolutely brilliant! I laughed so loud that my neighbours should have definitely heard it. Hilarious!

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Date: 2008-10-18 02:25 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] strangevisitor7.livejournal.com
Thanks! The boys are so much fun to write as ghosts and poor JD it's been 100 years and he's still the kid.

Glad you are enjoying the story!

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Date: 2008-12-28 03:18 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] brigid-tanner.livejournal.com
LOL!! Good job balancing all the characters and getting them to sound right.

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Date: 2008-12-28 03:27 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] strangevisitor7.livejournal.com
Thanks. Glad you enjoyed it.

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Date: 2009-04-29 07:39 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] rubystandish.livejournal.com
(...JD returned the gun to its holster. “I don’t like ‘em. Why don’t they just leave?”)

Even in death JD is just so cute! Like how Nathan is still the mother hen to the boys.

Another great chapter moving on to the next one.

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Date: 2009-04-30 12:35 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] strangevisitor7.livejournal.com
thanks - I adore JD and Nathan does not take kindly to the boys getting shot even if he doesn't need to doctor them any more

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