Beta needed for NCIS / CSI fic

[strangevisitor7]

Back when I was new to this writing stuff, I signed up for the crime crossover ficathon.
I never realized I could get assigned something I would never write - it was after all my first ficathon. Still, I persevered and I have completed one of my assigned stories. (I only needed to do one of the 3 suggested)

If I sound less than enthusiastic, well you're right. I am desperate for some feed back and a real tough beta. This is an NCIS/CSI cross that specifically wanted a story about Gibbs and Lady Heather. This is rated PG - don't ever expect NC-17 from me - i giggle too much when i try to write it.

I would be most grateful for any help. So very desperate and willing to resort to bribery.

Comments

[strainconductor.livejournal.com]

I wish I could! Alas I've never seen CSI, so I know nothing of that fandom :(

But if you need a look over dealing with plot...and with the NCIS part, I could help?

[strangevisitor7.livejournal.com]

Unfortunately - I tell the Story from Lady Heather's POV so knowledge of that character, i fear, would be essential.

I'm still happy to send it.

[sophiedb.livejournal.com]

Have you looked at fandom_betas?

I can't see any CSI fans on the list, but NCIS is here:
http://community.livejournal.com/fandom_betas/656.html?thread=85904

[strangevisitor7.livejournal.com]

Thanks I'll take a look

[strangevisitor7.livejournal.com]

Thank you - I found a fantastic Beta on that site. The story is worlds better than it was. I am actually no longer ashamed of it!