Well, you're doing a great job so far! Started off suspensfully, and kept on with a great premise. There's a great contiuous flow, similar to an episode perhaps, and there's always something happening. ^__^

And yeah, I also lurk around the TwoP Motivational thread. I made a couple of posters ages ago, but mostly I lurk, occasionally coming out to express my admiration for a particularly clever or dirty poster. :) It's so fun, I've got like 400 of thse things saved to my computer.